You are approaching it with a good principle...so there is literally zero insult (if receiving end appreciates what that principle is).
More Indians need to hear it (many are deluded/ignorant, have too much ego they generally "cross-harness"... and/or deflect to some silly apologism/excuse).
It is why I give big credit to red-effect and others (alongside and before him) that speak in very plain rational terms about faults....and hammer away on it again and again....and show rational compromise + credit when it is merited too.
It all reminds me personally of my own conversations regarding ego-freaks on all kind of things (Arjun included), India or non-India related....sometimes almost word for word...and harsher ways than you have here.
Have to keep in mind that Ego-freaks:
A) Are not exclusive to any society, they are a human condition/prevalence at large.
B) End up shielding and promoting mediocrity, incompetence, corruption and even abject failures.
C) DETRACT from the successes (which are clear and need definition as to WHY they succeeded...rather than throwing those in with the gunk too)...ironically exact reverse of what they (by irrational emotionalism) intend.
I mean you can't throw crap with good and hope the crap is lifted by the good.....the crap by its definition is crap. You need to minimise crap and have more good to win overall. But ego-freak would try have you believe otherwise.
System that gathers/enables (BAD!) or prevents/disenables (GOOD!) ego-freaks et al. (and all the crap they inevitably leave in their wake) is what is to be studied, implemented, perfected, expanded and entrenched by rational reasoned folks.
The less detritus you have clogging up a pipe, the more the pipe lets flow. It's really that simple.
Again, Turks and others can muse on how/what/where it applies in their own specific realm and context.